torso study

pbalsach · Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 12:48 pm Post subject: torso study

Hi guys!
i'll post all my torso sketches here.

Feel free to make crits and comments, if you want to make any corrections you are more than welcome to do it .

Thanks!

cakeypigdog · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 6:52 am Post subject:

nice pere!

pbalsach · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 11:00 am Post subject:

Thanks Jake!

Here is today's torso Very Happy

cakeypigdog · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 11:08 am Post subject:

wicked mate, nice style and proportion: big improvement!

pbalsach · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 11:29 am Post subject:

Thanks jake!
Every torso I feel more confortable doing it.
Is a good exercice to do it.
When I finish with torsos I'll start doing faces. Right now is my weak part Smile

pbalsach · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:05 am Post subject:

A new one

I know something on his belly is wrong, but I can't find what's wrong Confused

Any advice?

Thanks mates!

cakeypigdog · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 10:05 am Post subject:

hey mate i have started doing some of these. will put em at lunch.

its hard to crit the drawing, i would say you need more ton on the let side of his belly. it seems odd that it is so dark above the arm and then so light below it. do you have the original to show?

pbalsach · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 10:20 am Post subject:

thanks jake!
I can wait to see you drawings Razz

Here is the original :

pbalsach · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 10:57 am Post subject:

Here is today's torso Smile

cakeypigdog · Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 11:11 am Post subject:

nice one with the recent one pere. i would say that the main issue with the one you want help with is that there is not enough structure to it.

i wuld think more in terms of the 3d shapes of the figure and how they interact.

there is a real sense of twist in the sculptures abdomem that your painting just is not getting across.

the advice that rebecca gives on the cgchat site is good: think across the form. she provides illustration on what she means too.

i think you perhaps need to analyse more and copy less: try and get a real sense of what the forms are doing (picture them in 3d in your head) and try and get that down on your images.

great to see yo doing these, they are improving your skills a lot i think.

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