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| mya |
Mon 15th - Tue 16th: 'Superpower'2 days - 'Superpower'Feel free to ask for crits on your work if you're feeling brave! |
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| awilson |
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| cakeypigdog |
nice aidan!
lots left to do on mine! |
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| mya |
Nice work so far chaps!
Think i'll call this one done, so feel free to crit. 
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| awilson |
No crits from me - i'm lapping it all up! | ||
| dandyevans |
My criticism is that you are much better at drawing than I am. Sorry I've been absent a bit lately - I'm doing a 'commission' for my sister at the moment and its taking up all my free time! Will be back soon. |
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| awilson |
just as an aside, i tried doing some more work on this last night and feck me, i just couldnt get my mojo working. bah!
it's too damn hot i tells ya! |
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| poppylocke |
Very cool images so far here. I made a start on one last night - this is She-Gull with one of her superpowers, Summon Seagull (admittedly, not the coolest of powers to some, but fairly staple for this superhero)
I'd gladly take any crits - can't think of a better place to learn 
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| dandyevans |
That's gods way of telling you to go outside. |
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| cakeypigdog |
I had a ball on this, glad to finish it and easily the fastest painting i have ever done today! ZOOOM crits welcomed and appreciated. Except from Mya because he is not very good
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| mya |
Good work guys! For those who asked for crits:
Stacey: I think it might be better to cut away some of the background, so that the character takes up a bit more of the image. And maybe make the background colour a bit more neutral to let her stand out a bit...? Jake: I like the characters, but I think you could add a bit of excitement to the composition - at the moment, the image seems like it's divided pretty neatly into thirds. I don't know, maybe try cropping it, or moving them around a bit? |
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| awilson |
nice stuff everyone - again, no crits just enjoying the sheer surreality of things. Planets, Seagulls and superman bothering some kid. Thats what its all about! | ||
| awilson |
feeling slightly more inspired, and a whole lot less sweaty, i had another go at this, this evening.
wippage in the usual thread... http://art.myfastforum.org/sutra2788.php#2788 |
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| poppylocke |
Thankyou for the advice Mya! Was really helpful - I had another go last night
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