cakeypigdog
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master copiesstarted ding that torso thing over on cgtalk. cheers for sharing pere!!
here are my first 2
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pbalsach
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cool jake! Nice start!
The first one looks a bit wierd. I think the torso is too large isn't it?
The second one looks like the front torso is in the side view and the back is in 3/4.
Anyway nice drawings mate!
Thanks for sharing!
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cakeypigdog
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cheers for the crits pere.
i just did some overlays to check what you said.
i was quite pleased at how accurate i have been with these two.
the width on the torso in the first is a little wide towards the waist as i seem to have let the back shoulder (and back) come down a little.
the second one is virtually spot on. the bit of torso in front of the arm is slightly wide though.
i would recomend overlaying the original once you are done: i hadn't spotted either mistake before!
thanks again for your imput mate! got to keep geting better!!
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cakeypigdog
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2 more from me !!
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pbalsach
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WOW jake! massive improvment mate! you have a really good potential!
I love the second one! the light awesome!
The first one is really artistic I can't believe it mate!
I can't wait to see more stuff from you!
Keep it up!
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cakeypigdog
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heres todays. twentyt mins with conte pencil:
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pbalsach
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Nice one Jake as always!
The neck zone looks a bit long IMO.
I love the pencil line mate! 
Still a very very good drawing mate!
Sorry I didn't had time today. I just did a very basic blockout and I'll finish today at home. I'll post the final pic this afternoon 
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