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cakeypigdog
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this weeks COW on CA is 'killer prom queen' surely we have to all do it?
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awilson
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bennewman
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| Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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| sounds cool, but i'm too busy : ( |
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cakeypigdog
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:35 am Post subject: |
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here is my linework. crits apprecated chaps
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awilson
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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nice work jake - love the decapapompoms
i think you could help things a lot more with some compositional tweaking,
here's one i made earlier
a bit of forced perspective could help, also maybe overlap the characters a bit more?
girls 2, 3 and 5 are great but girl 4 seems really off balance and girl 1 just seems a little lifeless compared to the others ( she could have the head under her arm like a bastketball?)
please disregard any or all of the above!
now where's mya? MYAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
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cakeypigdog
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:36 pm Post subject: |
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| cheers willy, that is some fine ass critage. I hate girl 1 too... |
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mya
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:15 pm Post subject: |
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Looks nice so far Jake - think I might suggest adding something else to indicate that they're killers, other than the pompom heads - feels like there's more in the way of design work you could do to them.
Seems like you're making life a bit difficult for yourself by having five characters in the image - if it were me, I'd at least get rid of a couple of them, just so you can focus on the main character a bit more... |
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bennewman
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| Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:47 am Post subject: |
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i agree with all the previous crits!
lose girls 1 and 4, and also i'd suggest making the main girl a bit more prom and less cheerleader. the two girls could then be her cheer support kill team, but she'll be more distinguished as the promqueen.
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